- Boy at campfire cooking marshmallow's.
- Something creep's up behind him.
- Boy look's behind him, the something is actually a furry puppy with a ball
- Puppy rolls ball around and smells boy's marshmallow.
- Puppy walks over to boy and begs for food.
- Boy gets more marshmallow for puppy.
- Boy cooks marshmallow's, Puppy and boy eat,
- Puppy uses signals to make boy follow it, Boy follows puppy
- Puppy shows boy the way to a jungle, Boy thanks puppy
- Boy and puppy become family, Boy build's hut and gather's food.
- They have a happy life and boy names puppy Fluff, Fluff because puppy was furry.
Welcome to my blog. I'm in Room 18 and my teacher is Miss Power. We're a class of Year 7 and 8 students in Syndicate 4 at Grey Main School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Wednesday 27 August 2014
Marshmallow Bare Bonez
W.A.L.T:Create a bare bones story.
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Here is my Bear Bones story!
ReplyDeleteHope you enjoy it!
Talofa Riley
ReplyDeleteOMG... SO CUTE!!
This sort of relates to my dog because when we got him he was really cute.
How come you made your story SO CUTE?
See ya
Finlay
Awww thanks Fin! I love your story too. <3
ReplyDeletewhat a cool story Riley.
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