Hanging bed description by Riley
WALT: Put my capitals and full stops in the right place and to use strong adjectives.
The soft warm pillows and blankets wants you to ignore the fear of heights you may hold.
With its warm and soft blankets its like it wants you to just sink into them and go to sleep.
Its 10 feet off the ground and falling off would be scary but the strong vines are able to hold up such a big thing perfect for a king.
The rickety wooden ladder is scary to go up and the deep dark woods makes you even more scared especially the misty fog made you cough and feel like you're blind not being able to see much but you can still smell the sweet flowers and hear the chirping birds in the deep dark scary woods.
The only thing you can see is the signal by the glowing lamp.
all in my hanging bed.
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